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if you were coming soon
i would walk out to meet you
wherever you were

mars, maybe
the centre of the milky way
the great beyond

still i have
no word from you

somewhere someone said
there are no clean gateways

is it cold
wherever you are
whatever you've become
©2008-2009 !Unch
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:icononionpie:
:D j'aime :3 Your poems always have such good flow 8'D and I like the alliteration in there, and the imagery 8D G'job lol 8D

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House: Wanna know what happened to the toilet?
Wilson: ...She'll be with you where you claim to not want her.
House: I smashed it with a sledgehammer.
Wilson: I think in some ancient cultures, that was actually considered a proposal of marriage.
:iconskruffie:
Reminds me of a cold day in Seattle :<

It is still beautiful, nonetheless~

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Look, my life is full of monkeys, dumb weirdoes, old perverts, cross-eyed witches and stinky ferrets. Your opinions are the least of my worries. ~Zoë in Sluggy Freelance
:iconalchemically:
Unchles, you should watch Voices of a Distant Star. This poem is PERFECT for this movie.
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I shall!

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batine acid
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;_; Thank you so much!

I can always count on you for the most useful reviews. <3

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batine acid
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It's fascinating seeing what images words can conjure. I guess that's the goal of a poet.

Thanks so much. <3

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batine acid
:icononionpie:
no problem 8D Just doing my civic duty :3

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House: Wanna know what happened to the toilet?
Wilson: ...She'll be with you where you claim to not want her.
House: I smashed it with a sledgehammer.
Wilson: I think in some ancient cultures, that was actually considered a proposal of marriage.
:iconyour-silent-songbird:
I'm really jealous of the feeling you capture so easily. T^T

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Life is the mistakes you make and the effort you put into fixing them. ~Yours truly
:icontangerine-tickle:
Reminds me of how distant my one friend is becoming. :'[

But great poem, nonetheless! :lol:

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